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PostSubject: MORE FLUID WITH GOD   Mon May 14, 2018 5:18 pm

MORE FLUID WITH GOD
 
 
One day, I became a monk
And began to meditate
About air
 
Like some monastery awakening
i became one with transcendental and time
 
and in a state of stylized serine
trading ignorance for bliss
i suddenly remembered to hum!
 
Softly       
i began to listen and hear
Stories of the wind until
My heart began to sing
 
My skin became a big bass drum
pulsating beneath
blood and bone, bruised, but
no more lamenting yesterday’s blues
 
i imagined paradise east of Eden
and at the gate the Cheribum
were sleeping but,
the sword was still flashing
 
Soon the meditation of my heart began
to sing a new song –
Daylight peered into being
around corners no more
fraught with fear,
moments gravitated
between splendor
still hanging on the past
gravitating movements
somewhat subsided, yet unimpeded
Choreographed impromptu
left soft silhouettes
standing
Like angels weeping
for the lost and lonely,
Moments danced
A twirly dervish of
supernovas and
rhythms burst forth
heart strings played a
new symphony of inspired joys,
of superlative domains
Until my breath became one
with His
like life breathed life
air moving
more alive, more vibrant


And me,
out of body more than ever
more immersed,
more translucent –
 
More Fluid
with God.
 
Michael S. McNee
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Remastered May 2018
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PostSubject: Re: MORE FLUID WITH GOD   Mon May 14, 2018 5:31 pm

As i read your post this came immediately to mind.


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PostSubject: Re: MORE FLUID WITH GOD   Tue May 15, 2018 6:06 pm

Yes that's quite the video, on another level of understanding the Psalms declare that creation sings, the flowers and the sun moon and stars declare the Glory of God! All bear witness to the Truth, so men are without excuse!

Still when I write a poem I have no idea how it will be perceived, but the Spirit is involved nevertheless by every heart that reads whether indifferent or deeply moved, artistic expression takes the reader or viewer to different places, without art and poetry the world would be short sighted and without voice and void of feeling, almost stoic to some degree since the artist describes such things the way he see's and feels it and this shared experience is what other's sometimes relate!

In special cases a stick man drawn by my daughter given to me as a gift has far more merit and meaning than a prodigies best, so it's not so much about technique and skill, but more about meaning and substance or a matter of the heart in my opinion especially if it's a reflection of love, especially God's love!
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