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PostSubject: Healing Love Abides In You   Sat Sep 23, 2017 11:20 am

Black on black where darkness hides me
Shadows weep for love that’s failed
My cherished dreams that were before me
Have gone to sea they’ve all set sail

In pain I cried out for your mercy
From deep to deep I  called to you
Like cooling showers in the summer
Your love came down my heart renewed

You take the heart that’s filled with pain
With gentle rain wash wounds away
And piece by piece restored this way
For healing love…abides in you

Spirit lead me from these hollows
Away from twilights drowning sorrows
Save me in the midnight hours 
living water shower me
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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sat Sep 23, 2017 11:36 am

I like this, what's not to like but I get a sense that you're feeling out this site and that you're holding back,,,let it fly kiddo'!

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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sat Sep 23, 2017 11:54 am

@oneagleswings wrote:
I like this, what's not to like but I get a sense that you're feeling out this site and that you're holding back,,,let it fly kiddo'!

Thanks, not holding back, doing re-writes of older stuff right now.
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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sat Sep 23, 2017 12:09 pm

Yup, I've found myself doing the same thing from time to time...no offense meant:) What is your age by the way?

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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sat Sep 23, 2017 11:49 pm

@oneagleswings wrote:
Yup, I've found myself doing the same thing from time to time...no offense meant:) What is your age by the way?

No offense taken, you've been very encouraging from the start, very helpful.  I am 68 and retired from the US Postal service, still married after 41 years with 2 adult children and 3 grand kids.

And you?
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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sun Sep 24, 2017 12:37 pm

Disabled, no kids, 58.

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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sun Sep 24, 2017 3:39 pm

@oneagleswings wrote:
Disabled, no kids, 58.

Sorry to hear about the disability - does it give you more time to write?
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PostSubject: Re: Healing Love Abides In You   Sun Sep 24, 2017 4:14 pm

Finding time to write was never a problem. Making the time to capture what comes is the "key" wherever, whenever:)

Like plucking from out of a stream...or watching it go on by and wishing you had, it's a conscious choice (free will).

I suspect you know exactly what i'm speaking to:)

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