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PostSubject: I Have a Good God   Sat Aug 20, 2016 1:41 pm

I have a good God
He takes care of me
When I am low.

I am often low
And low is the valley
Upon which I travail

Low is the valley
Upon which I travail.
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PostSubject: Re: I Have a Good God   Sat Aug 20, 2016 1:51 pm

"Even in a garden nourished solely by the tears of past sorrows, something beautiful, may yet...still grow"-O.E.W.

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PostSubject: Re: I Have a Good God   Sat Aug 20, 2016 1:56 pm

Beautifully put! Welcome to CCW   howdy

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PostSubject: Re: I Have a Good God   Sat Aug 20, 2016 2:14 pm

You used "travail" twice to great effect in few words overall:)
Nicely done.

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PostSubject: Re: I Have a Good God   Sat Aug 20, 2016 2:33 pm

Thank you oneagleswings and Lora! I very much appreciate your words.
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