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Lori Mitchell
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PostSubject: Getting It Together   Thu Jul 07, 2016 11:16 pm

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Trying to get it together
But alone I am vanquished
I implore to the Almighty
For grace-filled wisdom
That’s cultivated in a servant’s heart

My soul’s desire
Is for a steadfast fervor to grow
My heart to ache for the lost
And joy to supply my days
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PostSubject: Re: Getting It Together   Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:44 am

Short and sweet, conversational, relational, reads like a psalm.
"Vanquished" good choice of word, has power!

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PostSubject: Re: Getting It Together   Sun Jul 10, 2016 1:09 pm

Beautiful! Don't know how many times I've prayed a similar prayer.

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