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PostSubject: Killer Attraction   Sun May 15, 2016 8:19 pm

Willing gate open
Penetrating pure covering
Rushing through dark tunnel
Bouncing off fleshy mirror
Displayed on cerebral screen
 
Images turned play things
Trained to entice, ordered to lure
Promising pleasure, fantasy’s fulfillment
Dancing to dare you
Hoping to share you
 
Stolen secretly away
Cloudy covering
Tunnel walls torn, scarred
Cracked mirror
Reruns on cerebral screen
 
Liar now laughing, mocking
Hysterically spinning
Spiraling down, down, down
Chains of shame, secrecy, pride
Arms stretched out for captivity
 
Secret open
Hearts are broken
True love stolen
Trust is lost
Torn asunder
 
Savior bleeding, groaning, dying
Past, present, future
Holy horror
Dead. Buried. Risen
Restoring , Forgiving

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PostSubject: Re: Killer Attraction   Mon May 16, 2016 7:59 am

There is a fine line between observance and hyper-vigilance, you went right to the very threshold with this piece without lunging over...well done. Great example of exercising restraint in judgment and seeing two sides to issues, just like the duality in every Christian's life the "old self" in constant conflict with the "new".   

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PostSubject: Re: Killer Attraction   Mon May 16, 2016 3:50 pm

Thanks, OEW.  I have three friends right now who are dealing with this issue in their lives.  It is so sad to witness the destruction that comes with this sin.

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