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PostSubject: In my dream I saw my tear   Tue Feb 09, 2016 1:36 pm

Dreaming of a little piece of peace, I see the beast
Screaming at the demons quick release, I hear a priest...



Last rites read as I'm crumpled on the floor
and I cease to exist, my heart beats...no...more...
Cease & desist, I couldn't resist temptation
Body deceased...there is no resuscitation
From far behind my mind I find a final breath
breathing out my soul, which will never taste death
Who am I...that when I die...
I should cause my soul to cry
Yet cry it did...such a surreal affair
as a teardrop stopped right there in mid-air
In my dream I saw my tear spinning 'round and 'round
and from deep within my tear I hear a beautiful sound
It's not the sound of the sadness that I had hoped to forget
It's a memory of a tomorrow that hasn't happened yet
I hear my mother's voice...I hear my children's laughter
I listen as my past becomes my happily-ever-after
and in my tear I hear my dad
making up for times not had
The joy within my tear was growing bigger and stronger
and I wish I could've listened to my tear a little longer
but as I woke from my dream, my tear eternally turning
I knew each tear cried is a lesson worth learning...



So to hell with the beast and the pain inside of me
Love will set my teardrops free...

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PostSubject: Re: In my dream I saw my tear   Mon Feb 15, 2016 6:01 am

"I-I-I-I...canta' y no llores..."
Is this supposed to sound like a Mexican drinkin' song?

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PostSubject: Re: In my dream I saw my tear   Mon Feb 15, 2016 10:58 am

Ha! That was actually pretty funny, Anthony. You always did know how to cheer me up. Though I speak no Spanish, the video looks awesome. I accept your olive branch, my brotha. Peace

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PostSubject: Re: In my dream I saw my tear   Mon Feb 15, 2016 12:02 pm

That's the Spirit, take it light allow Romans 8:28 the final say:)
ONLY BECAUSE I LOVE YOU HAVE I REACHED OUT TO YOU IN A WAY WE BOTH HAVE KNOWN.
I love your writing always have...I don't patronize or blow smoke up anyone's ______!

When I tell someone "I love them" I always mean it in Jesus' name, there's a bunch of "I"'s for ya'!
Love ya' Bro'!

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PostSubject: Re: In my dream I saw my tear   Mon Feb 15, 2016 4:28 pm

Hey, I've gotten into physical altercations with some of my best friends, and when it was all said and done, we were still best friends. Things go the way they go, brotha. No doubt. Guess what? I finally got a new computer! I know, right. I still use the old Dellosauras most of the time though, until I figure out the new one. Technology certainly has come a long way. Sheesh. I will keep writing mostly my same types of salvation rhymes, because that is my own personal testimony, but I'll work on a few with other themes. Same message, though! Peace

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