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PostSubject: LOG   Mon Sep 28, 2015 12:18 pm

The painful  log is in your eye
                As you denounce another soul
                For being lesser than yourself
                Not meeting your exacting  goal
                Pharisees were just the same
                Judging all who failed their test
                Even Jesus lost their game
                Crucified at their request.

                We must serve the least, the best
                Befriending all, no matter what
                God sees us as perfect ones
                Pure, unblemished, not a spot
                As we're hardly adverts for
                The way that Christians ought to be
                Surely we should focus on
                More of what is really me.
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PostSubject: Re: LOG   Mon Sep 28, 2015 7:44 pm


"What goes along gets along?"
Turn a blind eye to those who call themselves Exclusively "The Only True Christians" and yet deny the Deity of Christ? Uh-uh sorry, ain't-a- gonna-happen-no-sirree-Bob.

A sleepy watchman with a rusty sword is of no avail.
Nice poem though, aside from the confusing message. 
I don't know about denouncements but chastening at times is purposeful and necessary guidance/correction in love.
"Truth can be outraged by silence quite as cruelly as by speech."-Amelia Barr 

Happens to the best of us:)
Keep writing 'Pilgrim', the journey's just begun and 'progressing' well!
God Bless!

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