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PostSubject: Glories of the Night   Mon Jun 15, 2015 8:40 pm

Gazing into the night sky
The wondrous spectacle of tiny, twinkling lights
Beauty on such a grand scale
That my mind cannot comprehend it
How great is God
That has called forth such beauty
And how great must be His love for His creation
To lavish such amazing splendor
Such luxurious wonders
Upon His creatures

Tremendous balls of fiery energy
Sent hurtling through the vastness of space
At His Word
At His command
The earth beneath my feet
He hung upon nothing
How can my tiny, finite mind
Encompass the might
The terrifying majesty
Of the One Who created me

And yet
He loves me
In my mother's womb, He knew me
The very hairs on my head are numbered
He knows my mind, though I do not
The secrets of my heart are not hid from Him
Jealousies, lusts, greed
All are laid bare before Him
Yet He does not turn away
He loves me
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PostSubject: Re: Glories of the Night   Mon Jun 15, 2015 8:45 pm

Pretty good for a first attempt...don't stop now!

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PostSubject: Re: Glories of the Night   Mon Jun 15, 2015 8:49 pm

I truly appreciate your feedback.  Thank you so much.
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PostSubject: Re: Glories of the Night   Mon Jun 15, 2015 8:53 pm

Maybe with your fresh enthusiasm some new life can be breathed into this old chugger!

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