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PostSubject: Surrender   Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:16 pm


Surrender

By The Rhythmless Rapper

I want
To fall under
The power of Someone greater
To be utterly captivated
My mind does not even bother
To question, appeal to reason
but simply...

Surrender.
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PostSubject: Re: Surrender   Sat Aug 30, 2014 5:06 pm

Very, very smoooooth, yo. No doubt.

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