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PostSubject: Poem: Sacred Song   Fri Aug 22, 2014 8:57 am

Sacred Song
© Biz Gainey, 2013

Sacred song sung in
Hallowed hall;
Honored voice springs forth.

Havoc now birthed
In chaos beneath.
Life roars to life,
Signals sound in the deep.
     Chaos whispers
     In the deep of the night
Wondering . . .
Translucent fright;
Knowing.

Thunderous joy from beyond all once known
Just beneath 
     The deep cry
Site has brought life;
And death to the dead of the night.
A source unseen
The light has come.

Array the light;
The light does array!

Chaos squirms
Chaos shivers
Chaos quivers
     takes flight
     takes flight!

Fleeing!
Sleep dark one, sleep;
     Dissipate.
Never again to reign;
Supreme!

A glimmer of hope has burst violently forth,
Marshaling order
In triumphant light;
Renewal renewed
Among the cursed of the deepest curse

Sacred song now sprung
Let there be . . .
     Let there be . . .
          Let there be . . .
Light!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem: Sacred Song   Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:55 pm

Beautiful! Word.

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PostSubject: Re: Poem: Sacred Song   Thu Aug 28, 2014 1:18 pm

Thanks so much!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem: Sacred Song   Thu Jan 22, 2015 10:17 pm

That's a beautiful, vivid piece - especially the second-last stanza.
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PostSubject: Re: Poem: Sacred Song   Fri Jan 23, 2015 11:53 am

Thanks so much!!
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