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PostSubject: Ripped By the Passion   Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:29 am

Ripped By the Passion


 


Has it ripped you?
That look on His face
As the mother caught
A glimpse
And they yanked Him away.
_____
The momentum
Of prosecution
Sweeps over Goodness;
The chains, the sweat,
The martial pace.
_____
A rude woodwork
Lades His shoulders.
Streets once rejoicing
At the message
Now curse and scrape.
_____
But has it ripped you?
Seeing many falls
And lashings.
The Peacemaker
Inciting matchless hate.
_____
And friends stare mutely
But dare not step up.
Even the governor
Flinches at this task.
God’s will be done.
_____
It ripped Him…God
To see a Son so
Badly shamed, pained,
Rebuked and drained,
As per Plan.
_____
That target hill on
Which salvation stands.
The spikes that butcher
Feet and hands.
The ridiculous crown.
_____
But show me, Man.
It rips and rocks you.
Or else REMOVE!
Another broken reed,
Christ’s worth to prove.


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PostSubject: Re: Ripped By the Passion   Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:34 am

POW! ZING! KA-PLOW!

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