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PostSubject: truly true   Sat Jun 22, 2013 11:31 am

I thought of you today, and that thought never went away
and there were thoughts within that thought of things my lips could never say
I couldn't convey the way I feel for you if we were standing face to face
but behind these eyes a memory lies of a distant, far off place
A place of peace...of happiness...a place that is truly true
and in this place you and I embrace, for I long to belong to you
Memories, it seems to me, are highly underrated
and before we met I knew I'd never forget this one not yet created
My song, my muse, my jazz, my blues...these things you are to me
I'm a poetical prisoner locked behind my heart, your whisper is the key
I hear your smile a mile away, your laughter the poet seeks
The lonely mime is lost in time...in rhyme is how he speaks
Time and space I can't erase, though thoughts of you abound
so 'til then, 'til we meet again, just know I'm waiting to be found...




Even though I know I have become the soiled dove
knowing I'm still yours is the only thing I think of
The pedestal you keep me on...oh, so high above
Jesus...Dearest Jesus...I'm in love with your love

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PostSubject: Re: truly true   Sat Jun 22, 2013 7:52 pm

Beautiful love letter..."Tadow?!"
Doesn't sound the same when i type it bro', but you know what i mean.

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