Christian Creative Writers

A FREE CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM
 
HomeHome  PortalPortal  FAQFAQ  SearchSearch  RegisterRegister  Log in  SpotlightSpotlight  JesusJesus  
NO REGISTRATION**FEEL FREE TO COMMENT AS A GUEST**NO REGISTRATION**POST YOUR POETRY OR STORIES AS A GUEST**NO REGISTRATION**WRITERS RESOURCES**NO REGISTRATION**CHRISTIAN DISCUSSION**NO REGISTRATION**GREAT WRITING TIPS**

Post new topic   Reply to topic
Share | 
 

 Diamonds

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Malakhim
WRITER (51-100 posts)
WRITER (51-100 posts)
avatar

2x POETRY CONTEST WINNER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER
Posts : 75
Age : 23
Join date : 2012-08-26
Location : Texas

PostSubject: Diamonds    Wed Jun 19, 2013 11:47 pm

She's as beautiful as a diamond 
And she's got the cuts like one too
But sometimes she feels like she's in a glass case waiting to be used
Her life at home isn't much better than the life that's showing
And there's a guy she knows she'd like to call her own
she sees him as love
He just sees her as a fling
and he's got her wrapped around his finger like a ring
after years and years of pressure her heart's been hardened to pain and losing will to get loose
but shes caught up in love and she wont be moved!
Shes pawned herself out!
selling herself short!
and every time her happiness grows shes forced to abort it
her hearts a house
but it needs home!
she needs peace
she needs some hope!


When I met her I saw a diamond that's been in the rough
I touched her scars and said "what an exquisite cut"
And I told her that she's beautiful! 
That she's worth way more than she thinks!
That she's not defined by the choices she's made!
I told her if he's a man he would see you're a diamond
And if he doesn't like your cut he doesn't deserve anything 
i told her that i know that it hurts!
that ive been there too
That sometimes in life it feels like you're living to lose

But baby girl if you could see the luster on your face
If you could see through the same clarity you portray!
You're worth more than you think....

Now I know I know I know
You think if there was a God He would save you
And if there was a God He'd look at your cuts and hate you
Because I know that feeling
I know how it feels to feel like you're praying but it's all hitting the ceiling
"WHERE ARE YOU GOD WHY WON'T YOU HELP ME?!
If you were real why won't you help me!"
And I spent years and years and years
Laying in a bathtub drowning in my tears
 asking for a God who didn't exist to help me
I kept screaming and never got any answers
If God wanted to help me He ran out of chances!
Oh I was so done
So I know how you feel....
I know how you feel
Then one day I finally gave up trying and praying and started just praying
And I got an answer.....
He was there the whole time just waiting 
Waiting for me to stop trying 
And give it to him

but i have hope and know someone who can help you
His name is Jesus
He healed my heart
and He's standing there waiting to kiss your scars
He made you a diamond
and brags about your beauty
So if you would stop trying
And ask Him truly...

Jesus take my life and give me a new one
Back to top Go down
oneagleswings
ADMIN II
ADMIN II
avatar

CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW GOLD MEMBER
CCW SUPPORTER CCW SUPPORTER
2x POETRY CONTEST WINNER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER
Posts : 4422
Age : 58
Join date : 2011-08-30
Location : south carolina

PostSubject: Re: Diamonds    Thu Jun 20, 2013 5:58 am

These...the kind of diamonds which cannot be measured by karats.
"diamonds in the ruff"

___________________



dove 
 
"To one who has faith, no explanation is necessary. To one without faith, no explanation is possible."
- Thomas Aquinas

God Bless


Last edited by oneagleswings on Thu Jun 20, 2013 9:55 am; edited 2 times in total
Back to top Go down
oneagleswings
ADMIN II
ADMIN II
avatar

CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW GOLD MEMBER
CCW SUPPORTER CCW SUPPORTER
2x POETRY CONTEST WINNER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER
Posts : 4422
Age : 58
Join date : 2011-08-30
Location : south carolina

PostSubject: Re: Diamonds    Thu Jun 20, 2013 8:48 am

Can one see the unconscious "non-secular", struggling within the "secular?"...it's a gem of a song either way. It's how we listen that matters (Romans 8:28).
Close one's eyes and devote this song to The Lord...and tell me if you agree or not.
Lot's of plaguarizers...but only one true Author!
Let me know if you think I am mistaken in this...please.

___________________



dove 
 
"To one who has faith, no explanation is necessary. To one without faith, no explanation is possible."
- Thomas Aquinas

God Bless
Back to top Go down
rhymarhyma
WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
avatar

Posts : 555
Join date : 2011-08-11
Location : Denver, CO

PostSubject: Re: Diamonds    Thu Jun 20, 2013 1:31 pm

Brilliant! No word-play intended. I know a lot of "diamonds", yo. So I pray. Word.

___________________

Back to top Go down
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Diamonds    

Back to top Go down
 
Diamonds
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Share this topic...
Link this topic
URL:
BBCode:
HTML:
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You can reply to topics in this forum
Christian Creative Writers :: CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM :: Poetry-
Post new topic   Reply to topic