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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Mirrors   Fri May 31, 2013 9:22 pm

Cerulean skies, oceans deep,
Mirrors of a glorious saviour,
Rolling hills of vibrant green,
Reflections of a plan before time.

Blanketed canvas of cotton fields,
Mirrors of a sin wiped clean,
Reddened clay now hard as stone,
Reflections of a God made known.

Grey and ruined, bandaids set in high,
Mirrors of a terrible pride,
Black as night, holed and crumbling,
Reflections of the judgment due.

Tanned, now scarlet, a sun setting low,
Mirrors of a new dawn.
Like the son, this Moon reflects a brighter call,
Reflections of a Lamb who died once for all.
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PostSubject: Re: Mirrors   Fri May 31, 2013 9:43 pm

Writing flows...titles don't, isn't it strange how that works?
What can I possibly comment on your writing...i'm a fan too!


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PostSubject: Re: Mirrors   Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:16 am

I'm glad it's not just me. I sometimes spend more time trying to title a poem than I spent writing it. True story. Another true story; fantastic poem! Absolutely.

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PostSubject: Re: Mirrors   Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:50 pm

It's so true. I think it's harder than actually writing the poem sometimes. It's probably my least favourite part of writing!
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