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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Oceans   Fri May 31, 2013 9:16 pm

Come like the ocean,
Waves growing higher,
Inundate my soul.
Saturate the very depths,
Bring refreshing, revealing and vital water.

Life to my dryness, bring
Life to my dryness,
Wrap yourself around me;
Consume all that I am.

Let your life inundate my soul
Saturate the very depths,
Come endlessly on roaring tides,
Constant as the cobalt sky.

Suffocate me in your presence,
Drown me in your endless life,
Let my last breath,
Let each gasp
Cry out for more; vitally desire.

Mould me with ferocious waves,
Carry me the distance; refresh my soul.
Inundate my everything,
Saturate the very depths
Until my heartbeat and your tide
Are one rhythm; one call.
Your ocean covering my shore.
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PostSubject: Re: Oceans   Fri May 31, 2013 9:48 pm

"in a dream breath epiphany
you glide upon a crest of sea-foam
engulf me like a tidal wave of spoken words
i succumb to your undertow
drown in your prose..."
(from an old poem...I wrote many years ago)

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PostSubject: Re: Oceans   Fri May 31, 2013 10:09 pm

That's really good! Like, really, really Good! Can I read the full poem?
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