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PostSubject: Mirror, mirror   Fri May 10, 2013 12:32 am

Mirror, mirror, on the wall
tell me why my teardrops fall...


BECAUSE IT'S A WAAAAAR!!!...Open your eyes or be blind
There's a battle for your soul deep inside your heart and mind
You...yeah, I'm talking to you
Running around doing all the things you wanna do
Trying...you're not trying hard enough
Caving in like a baby when things get tough
That girl in the buff...tisk, tisk, tisk
Twisted up in bliss, not even seeing the risk
You want the reward, but you're not willing to wait
You know the plan, man, do not deviate
Resuscitate your soul because you've already drowned
Crying at the intersection of Lost and Found
Which way you gonna go, son...you already know
You're only kiddin' yourself if you try and take it slow
as those bedroom eyes turn into bedroom thighs
and the morning time comes and you've said your goodbye's
and you can't undo what you just did
Right then, right there...you messed up, kid
You blew it and you knew it and you'll blow it again
I don't know with who and I don't know when
but you got a problem...and if you want my advice
for somebody else's sake, you should probably think twice
because that woman you said was special truly is to the Lord
and her own eternal future you just flat ignored
You're not just killing yourself, you're also destroying her life
If she's special enough to lay down with, she's special enough to be your wife
If you don't think of yourself as precious, what about her
How about "The way we're gonna be" instead of "The way we were"
Try thinking of someone else and you might not get stuck
because nobody's future rests upon plain dumb luck
and nobody really cares about your petty excuses
Just quit messin' around, you know the sorrow it produces
You'll always be blinded by lust until you begin to see clearer
First step; you wrote this rhyme to yourself on the glass of the mirror...

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PostSubject: Re: Mirror, mirror   Fri May 10, 2013 6:20 am


One of his greatest lies...
When we finally see him in the mirror it is only because he doesn't want us to see through his smoke screen, he attempts to block our view of those he holds captive in reflections of what he hates and envies the most. Our souls!

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