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PostSubject: That day was the day   Wed May 01, 2013 2:16 am

18 years ago, the Lord saved me and delivered me from the darkness. For 18 years, he has held my hand and walked me towards the light. 18 is the age of a man according to the law of the land. Now, standing as a man in God's eyes, I voluntarily join the army. God's army. The Lord is now sending me back to the darkness. Not to fall, but to fight...


I left yesterday and now I won't rewind
The day when the demons and darkness aligned
and the world turned a man to a madman confined
That day was the day I knew I lost my mind

Dear Jesus, my savior, I see what you've shown
I rise up, my eyes up, this seed that you've sown
Please send me a soldier, I can't fight alone
I'm not on my own...I'm not on my own...

Saint Michael, archangel, you've been there before
prepare me for battle, defend me in war
The demon's that haunt me I'm now hunting for
I'm runnin' no more...I'm runnin' no more...

Lend me a sword and I'll give you my all
Heart, body, mind and my soul will stand tall
A bloodthirsty brawl as I answer the call
I'm not gonna fall...I'm not gonna fall...

Demons and devils and darkness attack
Unleash the murderous devildog pack
You can't drag me down to the pitches of black
I'm not goin' back...I'm not goin' back...

Tearing my spirit straight outta my skin
Laughter, I hear it, your devilish grin
I no longer fear the beginning of sin
I'm straight jumpin' in...I'm straight jumpin' in...

A battle you want, then a battle you got
A fight to the death is the fight I was taught
I physically kill you when killing the thought
I'm not gettin' caught...I'm not gettin' caught...

I'll speak in a language that you'll understand
now back it on up or you'll catch this right hand
You're not welcome here, dirty demons, you're banned
I'm already planned...I'm already planned...

I curse you, I cuss you, I scream and I shout
My thirst let me crush you and all you're about
The water of life is my only way out
I'm not gonna doubt...I'm not gonna doubt...

Don't ever think I'm not ready to fight
even when creepin' up on me at night
You treacherous demons are now in my sight
I live in the light...I live in the light...

I was you, was with you, I know all your ways
I know your false master, the game that he plays
Destruction, disaster, the darkness of days
I'm bringin' the praise...I'm bringin' the praise...

Salvation has shown me, a moment occurred
Temptation once owned me, my vision was blurred
I'm telling the children the message I heard
I'm spreadin' the Word...I'm spreadin' the Word...

When the light breaks the night the thieves no longer thieve
and we see the deceitful web you try and weave
See that's when you die, the day we all believe
I'm not gonna grieve...I'm not gonna grieve...

The light lets me see so I'm no longer blind
I don't just avoid you, I destroy your kind
That day has prepared me to take back my mind
That day was the day the Lord knew I would find

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Wed May 01, 2013 5:07 am

Inheritance sometimes requires a journey, land will not come to you, one must go to it. "Outside of the gate" Brother, outside of the city limits, of all that is familiar, all that is comfortable...outside of where you now stand.
Love ya' bro'...very intense piece!!

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Sat May 04, 2013 12:50 am

Right on, my brotha. Hey, I never know what tomorrow will bring. No doubt.

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Thu May 09, 2013 3:50 am

Wow!!! You blow me away every time. I believe your work has the ability to reach the hearts of many, especially a certain kind of population that really needs it and is particularly difficult to reach. If you are able to get your work into their hands, imagine the kind of army you could help build for the Lord.

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Fri May 10, 2013 12:57 am

I am preparing for whatever the Lord calls me to do. Heart, mind, body, soul. No doubt. I don't know what his plan is yet, but something is gonna change. I feel it. Right now, I feel I have to be aggressive. Not only in my writing, but in all things Godly. I was just talking about this with Anthony the other day. Trippy. I'm on a mission, yo. Word. Looooove the new photo!

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Fri May 10, 2013 2:14 am

Huh, that's funny, when I was reading this piece, I had the same feelings come over me, and it just felt as if you were supposed to minister to the special population I mentioned.

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:39 am

Well, I signed up for Prison Ministry, because that's what I thought I was supposed to do, but I got denied. Bummer there, yo. I am, however, trying to stay tuned in as to what it is I'm supposed to do, and how to do it. Sometimes I don't listen so good. That last sentence was in my best Michael Corleone voice, which, just like my best Michael Martinez voice, was not all that great. Ha!

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Mon Jun 03, 2013 3:38 am

Don't stop searching. It will come your way in due time.

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PostSubject: Re: That day was the day   Mon Jun 03, 2013 1:56 pm

God will put you in the right place at the right time...maybe you are to minister to the wardens and politiicians instead of the actual prisoners

So many of those in power over us today seem to be held in darkness and need to be saved.

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