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PostSubject: A whisper of your name   Sat Apr 06, 2013 7:30 pm

My actions are eternal, I can't make 'em go away

and "I'm sorry" doesn't change the pain I caused you yesterday

but my words also live forever, so please believe me when I say

I love you, I love you, I love you today...



It's another sunny day in the 303

I'm gonna fly a mile high and let my spirit be free

Today's the only day that I'm promised to live

and I tell you right now, there's nothing I wouldn't give

to put a smile on your face and a song in your heart

'cause when we're holding hands together I know we'll never be apart

I started this rhyme with you in mind

and if I look inside myself it isn't hard to find

a vision of your beauty, a whisper of your name

moment by moment, life is never the same

Love grows bigger...faster...stronger

until my heart overloads and can't take it any longer

The brilliance of your love I can't even comprehend

but I'm so glad that I asked you to be more than a friend

Independently codependent, without your love I cannot thrive

Without you in my life I can't survive, I'm not alive

I live because of you, and that is nothing less than fact

and I pray loving you back is my final earthly act...



The blood of your love on my fingertips

offering grace as each drop drips

A celestial, heavenly, physical eclipse

as your name, dearest Jesus, whispers off my lips...

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PostSubject: Re: A whisper of your name   Tue Apr 09, 2013 1:56 pm

The ending made me teary. Just suddenly out of my heart, tears at the thought of that sweet and precious Name above all Names.

Love this one especially!

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