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PostSubject: How Foolish   Thu Mar 28, 2013 9:57 pm

How Foolish


Wisdom is Courting Me

I’ve seen Her from Afar for a Lifetime
Yet, I believed she never noticed me
Somehow I felt I wasn’t good enough for Her
Or maybe, She was too good for me.

How Foolish

At times I flirted with her
Simply out of Curiosity

Funny, She always responded with a Smile
As if to say,
“It’s Okay, I’d Like to get to Know You”

I must’ve been Shy
Or maybe too Proud
To Think someone So Subtly Beautiful
Was Perfect for Me

How Foolish

Now I’m old
I don’t quite look the Same
I still see Her Though
She’s more beautiful than Ever

Her distance appears
Not as Great
She bears that same Welcoming Smile

Wisdom is Courting Me.


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PostSubject: Re: How Foolish   Sat Mar 30, 2013 6:19 am

some very well spoken trues. well done
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PostSubject: Re: How Foolish   Tue Apr 30, 2013 9:17 pm

Wow! Nice piece. I love the way you ended this piece. We're not sure if this is a women until the last line, when it all becomes clear, as though wisdom comes flooding in.

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