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PostSubject: what it is I'm looking for   Tue Mar 19, 2013 2:35 am

Douleur...schmerz...fajdalom...pain

Does crying in the rain make one truly insane...




I closed my eyes hoping it's you I would find

and I cried your name in the back of my mind

I'm looking at your voice, I listen to your smile

Make this moment last forever...won't you stay a little while

A calm breeze blows but only goes so far

I may not know who I am, but I know who you are

I used to mask my emotions, I'd keep my feelings hidden

I loved being in love with all things forbidden

Isn't it mad to be madly in love

and it seems quite sad to be always thinking of

the love I never had so long, long ago

that only existed on a false tomorrow

That was then and this is now, and I am grateful that you waited

because now that you're here, Lord, the word "love" is underrated




Love...liefde...ahava...amor

I have found that I will find what it is I'm looking for...

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PostSubject: Re: what it is I'm looking for   Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:51 am

Although we as Christians pretty much know what to expect in the last line, most people would assume this poem is talking of an earthly love. So, when they come the last line, I can imagine what an impact it can have for an unsuspecting lost soul who needs to hear about the love we find in our Lord. Love, love, love this one Big Smile

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