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PostSubject: Poets' Evangel   Fri Mar 08, 2013 1:43 am

Poets' Evangel


It's a mirror
It's a ladder
It's a weapon for Mansoul
It's a bombast
From the Christ past
Crying now to be made whole.

It's a comfort
For the wounded
And a hospice for their hurt
It's a warning
To the haughty
That their Father came from dirt.

It's another
Look at Calvary
And another, yet again
It's a resume
On Jesus
Working still today for men.

It's a fairground
For the senses
But it must not leave the trail
Of the journey
Ever upward
By the folk who pass Death's Vale.

It's an invite
To the wayward
And a shelter for their night
It's adoption
To a family
Resting, washed and safe and right.

It's an offering
From the heart's purse
With but two small mites in hand.
It's a blessing
To the poets
That they hardly understand.

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PostSubject: Re: Poets' Evangel   Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:40 pm

I love the fast pace and repetitive lines in this one.It has an especially great message. Nice work.

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PostSubject: Re: Poets' Evangel   Wed May 01, 2013 5:13 am

Awesome message indeed!

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PostSubject: Re: Poets' Evangel   Wed May 01, 2013 7:18 am

Thanks Lori for your comment. The internet is such an amazing thing for touching people...who knows where...Doug
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