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PostSubject: Saturated in it...    Wed Mar 06, 2013 2:49 pm

Taken in by gimmicks
like fall-guys from Nantucket in limericks
Sardonic insincere apers, mimics and cynics
ACTS 19:15
"JESUS i know...PAUL i've heard of...BUT WHO ARE YOU?!"
run for your lives'...
screaming and naked, pretentious fools!
Good way to get your asses' handed to you!

This is no game,
advice and opinions are like head lice infestation
communicated and broadcast onto hapless scalps
by denizens of strongholds, principalities and dominions
Those who have closed their eyes
unaware of being compromised
in this...i too was once complicit

Every point made, dismissed...with a hiss
too focused on analyzing a stance
trying so hard to understand
by the knowledge in the palms of hands
sifting through fingers like sand
missing that...
"one more chance"
"words of a fool"
as G-D's reluctant tool
stubborn donkeys...obstinate mules

I said to the voice in the Light,
where i had shrunken.
"they won't listen to me...no one ever has"
and He sent me out from hiding anyway
didn't want the last dance
didn't want the last word
didn't want to be around anymore
didn't care to ever again be heard
He did not concur...

Only a Carpenter Divine
could convert a future foot stool
into something useful
But Father...
they just don't want to hear
The British ain't comin'
and i'm certainly no Paul Revere!

Please take me home...
in the most painful way possible
pain, is something i've grown accustomed to
i can understand it
and suffering pain well...for your sake...Honors You
this is something i know that i can do
please accept
my last poem
i'm sure there's something else i can do

I love You Lord,
and i thank You for loving me,
in Jesus' Holy Precious name,
i give thanks and Praise and Glory be,
to You Lord.
Thou Art Holy,
and worthy to be Praised,
Thy Name Above All Names,
Thou Art God alone!

Please ...hear my prayer O' Lord,
"Holy, Holy, is the Lord Almighty,
Heaven and Earth are filled with your Glory,
Hosannah in the highest,
Blessed is He who comes in the name of The Lord."
"Hosannah in the highest, Christ Jesus Holy one of God,
have Mercy on us ...sinners."

Acts 13:40-41

Blessed be those who heard and believed
Mercy and Grace to those who cannot hear You.

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"Dear God, please save us from half the people who think they're doing God's work"
"If the primary aim of a Captain were to preserve his ship, he would keep it in port forever"-Saint Thomas Aquinas 

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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Wed Mar 06, 2013 3:33 pm

Reading it for the third time.

God has given you such a gift and it would be missed if this is the last you plan to share.


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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Wed Mar 06, 2013 6:18 pm

i love The Lord and i know He Loves me, He is why i am able to say...i love you miss thena, God Bless.

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"Dear God, please save us from half the people who think they're doing God's work"
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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Wed Mar 06, 2013 6:19 pm

Love you too, sweet friend!

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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Thu Mar 07, 2013 7:08 pm

You pull into the truckstop parking lot, hug my neck, and show me the first draft of this, and I think to myself, WOW. My brother, I would not have dared to dream that you could have taken it to these heights though. I'm with Miss Thena, you would be greatly missed, you have too much to offer. Gifts are for giving, please keep giving with yours. Blessings
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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:57 am

It's so sad that He speaks to us so subtlely and softly and condescends in humility divine, deigns to incline to us when our voices and supplications have grown nearly inaudible, incoherent in times of extreme trials and yet we look for Jesus as a long-haired hippy with a beard and blue eyes.
If you were ever to hear G-D shout it might very well be the last thing any of us hear.
Learn from this...
As for myself...wherever the Lord takes me is more than fine with me.
One on one, one by one, or a crowd...that's up to Him, i'm keeping my eyes and ears tuned to Him. He has a lot to say about these times we are in.
I am very content, Blessed in fact to earn an honest living driving a truck and meeting great people on a day to day finding so much evidence of Christ doing a mighty work right here and now, right where we find ourselves' if we only, we open our eyes and our hearts.
Love to all, Peace to all the Brethren and Blessings in the name of Christ Our Holy Saviour and Redeemer.
Tap away on those keys...


bad horse
it just seems this way at times...



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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:02 am

How does God speak to you?
How do you see Him?
What does He look like?
Can He not walk alongside you
and yet not see Him?

Revelations arrive like blunt force trauma,
shock therapy by melodrama?
Stopped dead in your tracks by big, fat, smelly, no account, unworthy, truck drivers
and asking yourselves:
"did i just hear what i thought i heard, emanate from what i thought i saw with my eyes?"

A triple fudge peek-a-boo happy birthday surprise!
A zit on the tip o' yo' nose that crosses yo' eyes.

A mental double take like a diamond tipped stlyus off track!
Nails across a chalkboard?
Steam whistle sounding, lunch break is over!
Thunder booming, storm clouds on the horizon swirling, looming.

It's in that space momentarily accessed that we spend the rest of our days trying to re-create.
It's where the Creator of all things resides in us.
That "God particle" mystery...
scientists' will never...ever...find!



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"If the primary aim of a Captain were to preserve his ship, he would keep it in port forever"-Saint Thomas Aquinas 

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PostSubject: Re: Saturated in it...    Sun Apr 01, 2018 10:09 am

dove fish

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