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Len Williams Carver
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PostSubject: AFRAID   Thu Jan 24, 2013 12:51 am

AFRAID


This feeling afraid to share
Misery so very unfair

Hard to bear all this pain

Playing with feelings like a game

Move on from this despair and pain
Tired of tears and fears… going to dream

I am woman I am strong
No more will I be wrong

No more hanging head in shame
No more guilt, regret or blame



I believe in the miracles of choice

I kneel to pray, listening for His voice

For my Master’s love I wish to attain
I will achieve by this one true refrain
To You Lord I give my all I surrender

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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   Thu Jan 31, 2013 4:14 am

This one is very moving. Awesome work! I love the way you took us from despair to healing.

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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:32 pm

You are loved. Word. Beautiful poem, for sure.

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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   Thu Jan 31, 2013 2:15 pm

Quote :
I kneel to pray, listening for His voice

For my Master’s love I wish to attain
I will achieve by this one true refrain
To You Lord I give my all I surrender


Love this verse especially

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PostSubject: Re: AFRAID   Fri Feb 01, 2013 6:16 pm

I'm "afraid" i just love the heart that goes into your work!

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