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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Divine Authority   Mon Jan 21, 2013 11:04 pm

You wear light like a crown,
Oh the glorious splendour
Of your majesty and ageless reign.

You wear light like a robe,
Oh the wondrous power
of your mercy and gracious name.

And you sit on a throne of flames,
dancing fiercely in the wind
of your Spirit, wind unfading,
Carrying whispers of your love.

You wear light like a crown, light like a robe,
And you sit on a throne of flames.
In royalty divine; in authoritative mind.
Dominion is in your name.
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PostSubject: Re: Divine Authority   Sat Jan 26, 2013 5:36 pm

You've got some awesome skills as a poet. Love the structure, rhyme scheme, your use of alliteration ad consonance, and your moving message. Very nice work!

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