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Len Williams Carver
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PostSubject: LIVING WATER   Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:52 pm

A dew dampened morn
She left from home
Her mind chaotic and forlorn

Homeless man she did see
She ignored the request
She was not equipped
To deal with such as he
The thirsty the oppressed

He gazed at her in her fine dress
Please ma’am a sip I beg of thee
Her sin scarred heart did not extend
The bottled water in her hand

Distracted she turned to flee
Stepping from curb she was hit
Water landing where He sit

Turning head she cried out near death
Oh God help me I am in pain
Homeless man came to her side
With love coming from His lip
He said ‘I give you eternal life’
As her life began to dim
She sipped the Living Water
Offered by HIM

No longer lost to sin
She swiftly fled
To heaven’s gate
Christ had led
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WATER   Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:01 pm

Sniff You got me with that one.

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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WATER   Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:04 pm

ahhh perhaps I need to find a tissue box art clip to attach...tho did not mean to make you weep. there there
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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WATER   Thu Jan 17, 2013 6:50 pm

That one is a tear inducing one....:-)

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PostSubject: Re: LIVING WATER   Thu Jan 17, 2013 7:09 pm

Ah Thena did not mean to make you tear up ...now anther box of tissues in order. God bless you both for liking Praise God Blue
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