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PostSubject: The Color Red   Sun Oct 21, 2012 5:03 pm

This is the new one we put out and I hope it will bless you.

http://soundcloud.com/sudden-verge/the-color-red
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PostSubject: Re: The Color Red   Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:24 am

Well done! Great message in a story form song that draws the listener in. Is that a Strat or a Les Paul with the effects? My ear is not as good as my husbands and he is not here to ask right now. I like the full spectrum of sound in the mix, and that the vocals are out front. (I don't like to strain to hear what I think is the most important part...the message) and I enjoyed the beat to the bass and drums. My ear, on my system didn't pick up the back ground vocals that well.
May God use this creation to further His Kingdom!
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PostSubject: Re: The Color Red   Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:25 am

PS: I've bookmarked you so I can listen to your other works and share them!

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PostSubject: Re: The Color Red   Mon Oct 22, 2012 8:46 pm

That's my modified strat. I usually use a Michael Kelly, but wanted to try something different. Thank you. I try to write about personal experience and this is definitely the way I felt at the time. God seems to take me through a lot of emotions when I write and I honestly convey them in the lyrics.

God bless you.
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