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PostSubject: Who got served?   Sun Oct 07, 2012 9:53 pm

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Every person on earth is serving a purpose
But it's clear to me that our purpose is service
On a narrow path, beware of the curves
When you look back at yer life, who got served?


Verse 1

So much glutton for the flesh, so much lustful hunger
Self driven, self serving, Lord it makes me wonder
Why so much compassion in the face of this hate
Why so much patience as YOU sit and wait
Knowin' the fate of us indulgent sinners
So many lost souls it don't feel like a winner
But I keep goin' hard, ballin' out on the court
But it ain't easy tryin' to soften a heart
I represent the TRUTH, and I try to shine
But so many people screamin' the world is mine
Baubles and lights, superstars and idols
So many choices, they don't see one that's vital
Still I'm puttin' in work in the muck and the dirt
Cause every battle lost is an unbearable hurt
What's it worth, the stuff the things, or the money you stack
You better bow down and worship, 'fore HE sends Jesus on back


Chorus

Every person on earth is serving a purpose
But it's clear to me that our purpose is service
On a narrow path, beware of the curves
When you look back at yer life, who got served?


Verse 2

How do you spend your time, or place your riches
Findin' niches in cults, bein' advised by witches
Switches need flippin', you needin' some light
So many "truths" out there but only one's right
So education is key, and livin' the Word
Unashamedly and bold, steppin' out of the herd
And I'm roundin' third, headin' for home
Doin' my best to see I don't go it alone
Better believe I'm givin' all glory to God
Cause worldly values are lookin' shady and odd
And no jihad. false prophets or demons
Can slow me down once I start to steamin'
Screamin' Jesus is the way, the truth and the life
The price HE paid should have you thinkin' twice
Cause what you do means so much more than what you say
Jesus gave us a mission time to win the day


Chorus

Every person on earth is serving a purpose
But it's clear to me that our purpose is service
On a narrow path, beware of the curves
When you look back at yer life, who got served?


Verse 3

What's yer Facebook like, who do you follow on twitter
Do you consider your Lord or just things that glitter
HIS blood ran like a river to atone for the earth
Fallen by a curse now we misplacin' it's worth
Now yer soul has a thirst only ONE can quench
Imma be a waterboy, while you ridin' the bench
It ain't a spectator sport, it demands participation
It's the least we can do for the gift of creation
Always wastin' time sittin' in idle
You think the after life cares for your title
Then the devil sidles, whispering to the ego
Tryin' to undo what we do, wherever we go
HIS grace is enough to keep the blood pumpin'
I'm a Jesus freak out here bible thumpin'
I'll tell you somethin', hell is what we deserve
But HE sent an invitation so it's HIM Imma serve


Chorus

Every person on earth is serving a purpose
But it's clear to me that our purpose is service
On a narrow path, beware of the curves
When you look back at yer life, who got served?


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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Tue Oct 09, 2012 11:13 pm

I can sense your joy in that one. I couldn't help but smile even through the seriousness of the subject matter. I have a feeling that this will have an up-beat tune.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Wed Oct 10, 2012 10:13 pm

It's very upbeat and I rap it fairly fast. It's my new favorite. Class tonight was awesome, learning to shut up and listen. It is really gonna teach me discipline.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Thu Oct 11, 2012 6:17 am

It is your best thus far in my humble opinion, it really flows well...(i read it fast tempo!)

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:45 pm

Quote :
It ain't a spectator sport, it demands participation
My favorite line, been living and sharing it for years.

When you gonna have the music done to it? Can't wait to hear it.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sat Oct 13, 2012 11:49 am

Thanks for the feed back guys, it's invaluable to me. I have the rough draft recorded, very busy new schedule but when I move into my new place in a couple weeks I will get it done and post it.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sat Oct 13, 2012 1:04 pm

I look forward to it! Moving is never fun :melodramatic: but it's nice when it is all organized.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sat Oct 13, 2012 1:10 pm

Moving is a bear but I am very excited I finally get to live with my wife and son. Long time coming, long story.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sat Oct 13, 2012 1:45 pm

It may sound corny but..."good things come to those who wait!"
i wish you and yours' all happiness and prosperity in every way and may the Lord continue to pour out his abundant Blessings upon you all and those whose lives' you touch!

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 12:45 am

Awesome work Freely. I'm so glad you uploaded the recording. Blessings! I've missed you.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 1:01 am

Wow, it's exactly how i heard it when i first read it...really cool!
i know who got served...anyone who heard this...in His name, Amen?!

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 10:48 am

Praise God! Thanks for taking the time to listen. Who Got Served is definitely my favorite, HE has blessed us all so much and so many don't see it or lose focus or are too self interested ( myself included, sometimes) that we chase all the wrong things of this world. Those things are almost always the narrow path. We gotta keep praying and fighting.

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:27 pm

Oh no! Cant get my ipad to play it!

:melodramatic:

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 3:46 pm

Found an app that worked! Nice recordng! Helped it come to life for me. 

Invaluable piece to share with a few in my life. Is it alright if I share it?

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 5:07 pm

Please share, repost, sing it, whatever. If it spreads HIS message that's what I'm looking for

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PostSubject: Re: Who got served?   Sun Jun 23, 2013 8:07 pm

thank you

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