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PostSubject: Inside of Me   Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:16 pm

Show me the way to feel
When my heart's been torn a part
Show me the way to deal
When I feel I can't move on

God, please help me
God help me
Help to see
The one you see
The one you want
Me to be, 'cause I
I don't know
Know if she's inside
Deep down inside of me

Tell me why I do
Continue on the same road
Tell me why I do
Not do what I am told

God, please help me
God help me
Help me to see
The one you see
The one you want
Me to be, 'cause I
I don't know
Know if she's inside
I can't feel
Feel her hide
Deep down inside of me

It always seems I seems I walk this road, alone
Blindly ignoring your way
Wondering what it would be
Like for me
If I just became
The one you wanted
Originally
Without a fight
Just simply be

God, please help me
God help me
Help to see
The one you see
The one you want
Me to be, 'cause I
I don't know
Know if she's inside
Deep down inside of me
God, please help me
God help me
Help me to see
The one you see
The one you want
Me to be, 'cause I
I don't know
Know if she's inside
I can't feel
Feel her hide
Deep down inside of me

I can't feel her
I need to feel her
The one you put
Deep down inside
Of me
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PostSubject: Re: Inside of Me   Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:43 pm

A very unique piece. I love the way it flows. It would be an interesting song to hear to music. Nice work!

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PostSubject: Re: Inside of Me   Sat Jul 07, 2012 6:56 pm

A meloncholy but still inspiring piece
For me these lines describe the entrance to christian life

If I just became
The one you wanted
Originally
Without a fight
Just simply be

It is possible, Jessica, not to do more but just to be in Christ


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