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PostSubject: Time to Let Go   Fri May 18, 2012 9:34 pm

This song means so much to me, because I believe God gave me the words to comfort me when I struggle. They've helped me through some difficult times, and I hope you won't mind me sharing them with you.

Verse 1:

Oh I know that you're down
You think you're all on your own
You wonder if life will be
Spent stranded and alone
Can't you see?
There's a future hope for you
Take my hand
I'll be sure to see you through

Chorus:

It's time to let go
It's time to let go
Of the worries, troubles, fears
Your desires and your years
I'll lead you through, it's time to let go

Verse 2:

Your hope will be renewed
When you truly do fear me
And surrender all the hurt
Only then you'll be set free
Can't you see?
You're a lamb within my arms
Take my hand
I will keep you safe from harm

Bridge:

I know it's hard
The way is full of pain
It will be worth it
When you meet me face to face


Thank you for looking! If you have any feedback, I'm willing to listen.
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PostSubject: Re: Time to Let Go   Fri May 18, 2012 11:30 pm

First of all, I find it to be a breath a fresh air to see someone so young who loves the Lord as you do. It's plain to see that in your work. You're very talented and I can't wait to see what else you've written. Your lyrics flow nicely and it is very well written. I wouldn't change a thing about it. I found only one very small punctuation error in the first line. There should be a comma after the word "Oh." Other than that, outstanding work!

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