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PostSubject: I'm Fallen   Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:12 am

a rewrite of Can't You See

vs1 Standing on the corner of an empty street
Of another dead end town
My foot keeping tempo with a tired stop light
As I drank my last dime down
Watching as the sun set on another dream that died
I pulled my coat a little tighter, as I hung my head and cried.

vs2 The face that stared out at me
From the dirty window pane
Reflected accusation
Of the failure and the shame
How did I ever get this way, when did my life get turned away
From Your presence Lord, oh your peace I want to reclaim

cho. Can't You see just how far I've fallen?
I'm on my knees, do You even care?
I'm crying Lord, on your name I'm calling
Can't you see, just how far I've fallen?

vs3 All at once I sensed the strength
Of a brand new man in me
A life of needless struggle gone
Only sweet relief
I felt God's love rise up in me, I can live for Him, He died for me
In his strength I'll continue, And praise Him eternally

cho Can't you see, child, just how much I love you?
I gave it all, there's nothing left to give.
I made the way, on the cross, in the grave
And rose again, so that you may live

And rose again, so that you may live.



I hope to have music on this one soon, blessings
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PostSubject: Re: I'm Fallen   Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:52 am

absolutely beautiful, when are you posting the 'sung' version?

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PostSubject: Re: I'm Fallen   Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:07 pm

Love the changes. I think this one is a little stronger. Great work!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm Fallen   Sat Mar 17, 2012 9:19 am

Still orkin on some of the musical end. Changes and progressions. Learning as I go.
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PostSubject: Re: I'm Fallen   Sat Mar 17, 2012 9:20 am

Still learning to type too lol. That should be WORKING, whew!
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PostSubject: Re: I'm Fallen   Sat Mar 17, 2012 9:31 am

s'okay we fall we get up we fall we get up we fall we get up...when you stop getting back up, then start worrying!

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PostSubject: Re: I'm Fallen   Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:15 pm

Yeah, I fall so much I have learned to work on my back bullseye Nice peace though, truly, I lover the transition from your distorted thinking to HIS truth. Nicely done.

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