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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Enigmatic Eucharist   Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:10 am

Drops of claret like blood glinting in the moonlight, the pewter goblet lay empty on the ground...

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PostSubject: Re: Enigmatic Eucharist   Fri Mar 02, 2012 12:44 pm

Whispering wind wide, parallel voices chime. Slanting he called, then died. One refused, one still hanging- alive.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigmatic Eucharist   Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:29 pm

Beautiful!

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PostSubject: Re: Enigmatic Eucharist   Sat Mar 03, 2012 10:10 am




felled under the weight,
of all the sins of the world,
grieved Cyrene's shoulders,
sodden in miracle.

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PostSubject: Re: Enigmatic Eucharist   Tue Jan 22, 2013 5:22 am

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felled under the weight,
of all the sins of the world,
grieved Cyrene's shoulders,
sodden in miracle.

Just realised how powerful this was! I haven't posted in a long time (UNTIL TODAY) and reading everything again, with vision afresh is very enlightening.
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PostSubject: Re: Enigmatic Eucharist   Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:04 am

You were very sorely missed and i knew you would be back cloaked in power and authority from above. i must prepare for work now but i will be on after work to read your works anew with great anticipation. Welcome back Brother!

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