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PostSubject: The words of a fool   Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:01 pm

The words of a fool



Laid bare on page of white,
evidence of a crooked walk down a wicked way.

Vain-glorious, attention seeker,
vow breaker, faithless liar.
Filthy, broken, depraved, perverse.
Misguided, unsaved, worst of the worst!

Laid bare on page of white.
It's all about me.

Pointed finger, pathetic excuse of a man.
Narcissistic, unforgiving, resentful, bitter,
lustful, prideful, envious vitriol spitter !

Laid bare on page of white.

Silver tongued seducer,
self deluded,
sorry sight.
Oh, You told me to "write",
and I did,
full of self and emptied of You.

Thoughtlessly spewed
upon page of white.
Your's to discern or classify,
nothing left to try to justify.
Things I knew
when I knew nothing
and things revealed,
when I realized
I'd always loved You.

Oh, page of white,
The Potter made ornate vases
and spitoons as well.

A vase can crack,
it's contents spilled.
A spitoon can be cleansed,
a provisional substitute.

I speak to You now,
upon page of white,
from one once separated from you,
indeed separated from reality,
I say thank you,
I am grateful to be your's.

Across my heart You left footprints,
I tried so hard to cross out.
Crumpled it up, tossed it aside,
shed tears on your page,
I could not hide.

Page of white,
You turn the page,
re-write the verse,
for the book is Your's,
for your Glory,
words once stifled,
upon a new page burst.

"Holy, Holy, Holy is the Lord Almighty,
Heaven and Earth are filled with your Glory !"

The enemies strongholds cannot dampen,
nor withstand this victory shout!
Mind binding spirits cast out !
Delayed in Deliverance but not denied!
dealt the full measure of poisonous darts,
by Grace reproaches withstood.

Oh, Page of White,
guide me in all that is good
teach me all that is right,
may these words in spirit
take flight,
to you...

On eagles wings.


Thanks for reading
Peace,
God Bless.





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PostSubject: Re: The words of a fool   Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:32 pm

You reposted one of my favorites! Awesome! So happy, skipping...

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PostSubject: Re: The words of a fool   Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:45 am

I really can relate to this one brother. Vain-glorious....love it!

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PostSubject: Re: The words of a fool   Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:00 am

thank you

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PostSubject: Re: The words of a fool   Thu Jan 12, 2012 9:08 pm

Much depth, and strong wording, something to be proud of.
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PostSubject: Re: The words of a fool   Fri Jan 13, 2012 2:12 am

"the proud" will be humbled.
All Glory be to God!

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PostSubject: Re: The words of a fool   Tue Aug 16, 2016 2:10 pm

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