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PostSubject: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:28 am

Check out the recording in the music section..........

verse 1

Disobedient from the start, God's will just ripped apart
Self will and selfishness and an ugly sinful heart
doin' what I like, what I feel, what brings pleasure to me
By what I did, or what I do is HE measurin' me
So much sin stacked up, man I'm filled to bursting
Spiritual dehydration, it's for God's peace I'm thirsting
And hurtin', for certain, drowning in pain
Jesus is the water so I beg for the rain
Let me explain, man, I lived for myself
And broad was my path, I was headed to hell
Don't dwell on the past, or try to rewind it
Cause narrow is the gate but I'm determined to find it

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I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence
God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant
I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence
God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant

verse 2
HE never said it would be easy, but HE'd always be there
But so many false prophets, it's best to beware
And if I'm not careful I'll be following idols
Jesus is the only one that earned that title
But HE paid that price, the Father loves us so much
The spirit's touch will guide you if you follow the nudge
But garbage in, garbage out watch yer surroundings
But if you breath in the word brother you'll be astounded
That you found all yer hardship was a pathway to peace
And if you fill yourself with light, the devil has to release
And cease and desist, yeah his influence was strong
But if you take the time to notice God was there all along


chorus

I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence
God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant
I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence
God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant


verse 3

If you except the Lord, the devil will attack
But God's grace will show you yer on the right track
And yer ego will tell you an idea that seems proof
But God's will and the Word contains the whole truth
The answer ain't in man, or in any religion
Left or right of the cross, it's your decision
Accept no division., you can only serve one master
Your worship, service and praise is what God's really after
Total devotion, humility, and love
HE don't want you to suffer, but to rise up above
Don't mean life is easy, or even all that great
But if heaven is the fate, then it's worth the wait


chorus

I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence
God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant
I'm strugglin' and strivin' for a better existence
God's grace is on me, but I'm so resistant




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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:46 am

I love the rawness in your writing. It is full of truth and expresses the good and the bad without holding back. Great work. I can tell you put a lot of thought into this one. Love it. Some of my favorite lines:

Spiritual dehydration, it's for God's peace I'm thirsting
And hurtin', for certain, drowning in pain
Jesus is the water so I beg for the rain

But garbage in, garbage out watch yer surroundings
But if you breath in the word brother you'll be astounded
That you found all yer hardship was a pathway to peace
And if you fill yourself with light, the devil has to release

And yer ego will tell you an idea that seems proof
But God's will and the Word contains the whole truth
The answer ain't in man, or in any religion
Left or right of the cross, it's your decision

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:49 am

Cool, thank you. Yer feedback is invaluable to me. You have the same favorite parts as I. As soon as I get it recorded I will post it.

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:51 am

Awesome! Looking forward to it.

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 1:59 pm

It is your best so far, brilliant loved all of it...definitely heard this message intensely!!
Brilliant !!
Verse one is the strongest to me, anything that refers to water always gets my full attention as you may have noticed in some of the things I've posted.
Sets the tone for the rest very well !!

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:09 pm

Ahhhh...there it is. Thank you my brother, the recording is coming soon.

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:22 pm

LOVE IT !!!

THIS IS A HOMERUN OUTTA' DA' PARK, THAT BLOWS OUT STADIUM LIGHTS BRO' !!

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:00 pm

To me this piece summarizes a !powerful! testimony of pulling out of darkness and into real living and abundant life; it has the potential to connect with so many hearts as the Lord wills. It also reminds me of the process people like me go through as God calls out His Image in us layer by layer, so that we know what it means to be made in the Image of the Almighty, All Loving, All Humble, All Faithful God ( the list goes on). I have many favorite lines in this for example,
"Left or right of the cross, it's your decision", speaking of the two thieves crucified with Jesus Christ.

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Wed Dec 07, 2011 9:53 pm

Thank you for the feedback, it is highly appreciated. I posted the recording in the music section if you'd like to hear it. All glory to the Father.

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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:14 am

Spiritual dehydration! WOW! Great usage. Love this lyric! This describes every Christian! I will listen to the music too.
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PostSubject: Re: No resistance    Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:58 pm

There are many more lyrics here worth checking out, mine and others, divinely inspired. Thanks for taking the time. All glory to the Father.

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