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Dave Tittle
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PostSubject: Because You live   Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:15 pm

JESUS TAKES MY HAND BUT, I DON’T FEEL HIS TOUCH
MY SOULS’ DYING INSIDE, STILL, HE LOVES ME SO MUCH
I SPEAK OUT IN MY DARKNESS, TO SEE IF HE’S THERE
WHEN I DON’T GET AN ANSWER, I THINK, HE DOESN’T CARE
( PRE-CHORUS ) BUT, HIS PRESENCE IS HERE ALL AROUND ME
IT’S ALL UP TO ME TO REACH OUT
TO OPEN MY HEART TO THIS SAVIOR
AND LEARN, WHAT TRUE LOVE’S ABOUT
( PRE-CHORUS PART 2 ) I WANT YOU TO KNOW BUT, YOU’VE ALREADY KNOWN
I NEED YOU TO SEE BUT, YOU’VE ALREADY SEEN
I WANT YOU TO HEAR BUT, YOU’VE ALREADY HEARD
I WANT YOU TO LIVE BUT YOU ALREADY LIVE
( CHORUS) YOU KNOW EVERYTHING…YOU SEE EVERYTHING…YOU HEAR EVERYTHING
BECAUSE YOU LIVE!
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PostSubject: Re: Because You live   Sat Aug 20, 2011 12:25 pm

Amen!
I don't think you need to have this all in caps unless it tries to impact that it's more of a louder song, like rape or rock often is, but even still it being in caps doesn't seem really necessary.
But nevertheless this is a great message. Big Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Because You live   Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:19 pm

You have an awesome message in this lyric. I loved it. Keep writing!

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