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PostSubject: GODISNOWHERE   Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:50 pm

A cold, blank stare from my electric chair...GODISNOWHERE

How did I ever get there, how'd I get caught in that snare...GODI SNOWHERE

Discarded teddy bear in need of repair...GOD ISNO WHERE

One bullet to share or one bullet to spare...GODIS NOWHERE

A game of solitaire turns to a love affair...GODISNO WHERE

as a curse and a swear turn to a whisper of prayer...GOD ISNOWHERE

A love true and sincere has always been right here...GO DIS NOWHERE

Through each fear, each tear, it becomes more clear...GOD IS NOW HERE

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PostSubject: Re: GODISNOWHERE   Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:05 pm

Very good. Love the word play and the message. Nice work.

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PostSubject: Re: GODISNOWHERE   Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:34 pm

Very inspired piece.
"A love true and sincere has always been right here...GO DIS NOWHERE

Through each fear, each tear, it becomes more clear...GOD IS NOW HERE"
Yes, you've figured it out.
You see I realized something, from you quite profound if you didn't care you wouldn't bother to post something someone needs. Chastisement amongst friends is a blessing. We all need correction at times some more than others.
Intervention is sometimes badly needed but each case is different, sometimes it requires paying close attention not everyone is capable of that. They see only the hate.
You seem to be very attuned and attentive.
Got nothing but love for you Brother.
By the way, this is absolutely brilliant !
"Love must precede hatred, nothing is hated save for being contrary to a suitable thing which is loved"-Thomas Aquinas

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PostSubject: Re: GODISNOWHERE   Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:53 pm

What a great lesson!

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PostSubject: Re: GODISNOWHERE   Fri Oct 21, 2011 12:35 pm

Right on! I'll tell you what, I like to think I fell to the demon so my kids won't have to. I know they won't do exactly as I tell 'em to, or take every piece of advice (warning) that I give 'em, but at least now I have a better grasp of what to watch out for. I can't make 'em do what I feel they should do, and I know they're gonna fall and have hard times like everybody does. I can only influence 'em as much as possible, but by God's grace, at least I'm now in a position to be a positive influence. My three youngest didn't know me when I was caught in the world, and to be honest, they sometimes don't believe I was ever anybody else except the silly, goofy dad God allows me to be now. I don't go into graphic detail with 'em, but I do stress the importance of choices and decisions, and how just one bad one can change a persons life. Word. My three older kids, that's a whole 'nother Oprah. I wasn't such a great dad with them, and whereas they are not mine by blood, rather by abandonment, and they absolutely weren't obligated to allow me to stay in their lives when I was such a loser, they chose to anyway. They've forgiven me. They've given me another chance to be a good dad, and grandpa now, and I am forever appreciative. It's only God's forgiveness that I need, but it feels good to know I'm forgiven by people I did dirty when I was lost. I care about everybody and I am here to testify, brotha, to my own children and to anybody that'll listen, because that's what God wants me to do. Not out of guilt, but out of Glory. Word.

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PostSubject: Re: GODISNOWHERE   Tue Aug 30, 2016 9:08 pm

dove fish
Everything eventually comes full circle doesn't it?

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PostSubject: Re: GODISNOWHERE   Wed Aug 31, 2016 3:02 pm

If God be for you , who can be against you, very clever and well written thanks for
sharing, may God bless
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